I love you

2004-09-02 · 2067 阅读
<DIV>Your heart, is my  haven.
Your heartbeat, like an angel's applause.
When God created you and me love,
It was perfection without any flaws.
Your smile, is my sunlight.
Your lips, let me  pleasure.
When God created you and me in the world ,
You are to be me treasure.
Your kisses, tender rose petals.
Your whispers, pure noblesse.
When God let me love you,
It was the definition of finesse.
Your eyes, flawless rubies.
Your touch, heaven's blessing.
When God allow you love me ,
It was joy and love caressing.
Your breath, a soothing aroma.
Your face, a gracious flower.
When God created you my love,
It was for me to get
More gorgeous by the hour.
Your voice, a harmonic rhapsody.
Your gaze, my sweet surrender.
When God created you my love,
It was to make the Heavens splendor.
Your body, is my own heaven.
Your mind, where I reside.
When God created you my love,
It was for you to be my guide.
Your presence, heaven's grace.
Your taste, an exquisite flavor.
When God created you my love,
It was just for me to savor.
Your life, a tender dream.
Your soul, is my own life.
When God created you my love,
It was for you to be my wife.
This, a lover,s plea.
For what? To just convey,
That when God created me my love,
It was to please you in every way.</DIV>
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猫猫抱抱我 LV8

发表于 2-9-2004 22:01:31 | 显示全部楼层

小狮租房
so touching....good!!! original???

猫猫抱抱我 LV8

发表于 2-9-2004 22:07:59 | 显示全部楼层

a love letter.....can be sample

hail_tu LV4

发表于 14-9-2004 22:52:50 | 显示全部楼层

<P>Perfect! And perfect English too!</P>

猫猫抱抱我 LV8

发表于 14-9-2004 23:38:20 | 显示全部楼层

i think so!!

hello_babe LV7

发表于 15-9-2004 02:49:31 | 显示全部楼层

sofa![em04]

猫猫抱抱我 LV8

发表于 15-9-2004 03:57:38 | 显示全部楼层

<P>you are wind and i am sand...i love you as mice love rice.</P><P>the famous love words ever </P>

hello_babe LV7

发表于 15-9-2004 05:09:55 | 显示全部楼层

<P>here are my words--</P><P>you are tooth then i am the gum</P>[em04]

猫猫抱抱我 LV8

发表于 15-9-2004 06:04:53 | 显示全部楼层

<P>yours are not in rhyme.. you see, mine is mice against rice, but yours is tooth against gum..sounds bad. get it?</P>
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